Feedback from rough cut

Take Me Away - Feedback for rough cut

Good music
transitions not really suitable - corner
improve titles - Livetype
intro needs cutting to make it quicker
incidental sound?
images at the end could form a 9 tile table to show good editing skills.
good handheld camera
very little context
no real implication of story line.
clear use of shots
good use of photography gradually centering towards him
good sound, a bit loud
good titles, a little slow.
good music/sound
good titles.
transitions flow well
titles support theme
good variety of camera angles
sound matches theme.
continuity - cigarette
tilt shot - conventional
black and white.
good music
mostly good continuity.
good soundtrack throughout
titles could be better
needs to have a faster pace.
titles - good, clear, concise
sound - good, consistent
shot variety - different shots used but no actual differentiation in the shots. very good use of handheld camera.
music suits throughout
see camera in glasses
titles could be improved.
good variety of camera angles and sound
sounds reflect well for the mood of the film.